Me donโt want pain
Pain pain go away
Little me and old me want to play
Pain, stay away from me
You are not good for me
Or for anyone
ย I repeatโฆ.
Pain pain, you are not good for anyone
Not even yourself, apparently!
Pain pain
I have felt you in the past and
You are not something that felt good having my life
Pain pain
Why have I been made to think that, over time,
It is good to experience you and enjoy you?
Pain pain
You have a way you sneak up on me when I am very happy
Pain pain
It is like being with you is a way of me being โromanticโ
And yet, that is very wrong
Me doesnโt want to romance youโฆme wants to romance whomever or whatsoever I desire to
So many people are responsible for bringing you into my life, pain
I have put this notice to them
Just so they know what they have done is wrong and they need to change it for the better
This canโt keep on happening
I want to wake up one day and know that there is no more pain
And anguish and sorrow
Only light, love and joy!
There is so much I look forward in my life but you, pain
You have at your fingertips every single time you โneedโ me
I declare this as my first step towards dropping you and leaving you behind me
It has been nice knowing you, pain
But I have to go nowโฆ.do my own thing in this life and try to live all the time that I have left
Before you come after those that love me, when I have left their eyes and gaze
Do you have any parting shots for me, pain?
Arenโt you going to wish me good luck in my next endeavours?
I wish you all that is coming to you, pain
Thank you for writing this, Edgar. I needed it.
๐๐ you’re welcome, Rebecca!
Inspiring. Such beautiful words. Pain is part of life so we need to learn how to live with it.
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That is really powerful. I think so many of us have times in our lives where we either give into the pain or we stand and face it.
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Extremely awesome post, man. Pain is one of those things that can either swallow you whole or be overcome if you’re strong enough to stand up and say, “You can’t control my life.”
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Very nice poem about pain! Very relatable too. I like how you put in emotional pain as well as physical pain in there.
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I love to read the creative writing of people. It is fascinating to think about what is behind the writing.
For sure, Elise!
No one likes pain. This is a very powerful piece that we can all relate to.
I kkknnnooowwwwww, right?
What a great poem about pain. Really made me ponder about the role pain plays in our lives!
Thank you, Kileen!
I think all of us meet that darn fellow, Mr Pain, at times and we all do our best not to have him stay to long ๐
Yyyeeaaahhhhh…but well, things never go our way!
This is very powerful, thanks so much
You are welcome, Angelina!
This is really powerful and Extremely awesome poet. I can felt your pain while reading this poem. Keep it up!
Thank you.
That’s an amazing work! You did a great job and I love all the words that you used. Keep it up!
Thank you.
The pain of heartbreak can certainly be a lot to deal with. I really enjoyed reading this poem that you wrote!
Thank you, Em!
What a beautifully written and powerful piece. Pain is certainly inevitable but it is something we can either let ourselves lose to or overcome.
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Something about this reminds me of Bob Marley. Pain can be a dominating factor in our lives so I’m glad you found and outlet for it.
๐๐ thank you!